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Chapter 1

The wind caught the edge of the large white canvas tent, snapping the nylon ties against the aluminum poles with a sharp, rhythmic crack. American flags fluttered sluggishly in the heavy, humid air of the county shooting range, their red and white stripes blurred by the dust rising from the packed earth. Lucas stood just behind the firing line, his hand gripping the coarse, frayed fabric of his worn canvas gun bag. The bag had a small tear near the reinforced bottom, exposing a glint of blued steel that he quickly covered with his thumb. He wore a dark hoodie that was too large for his slight frame, the sleeves bunched up around his thin wrists, and a pair of faded blue jeans caked with dry mud at the cuffs. His light brown hair was messy, sticking to his forehead in damp clumps from the walk up the gravel road.

Marcus, the range safety officer in the black Leupold polo shirt and khaki pants, crossed his arms over his chest. His sunglasses reflected the harsh midday sun, hiding his eyes, but the heavy set of his jaw and the rigid posture of his middle-aged frame communicated clear irritation. Marcus looked down at the boy, his expression stern and unyielding. The other shooters and spectators standing near the benches murmured among themselves, shifting their weight as they watched the unexpected confrontation unfold beneath the canvas.

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Marcus leaned forward slightly, invading the boy's personal space without an inch of warmth. “Get off my line, kid,” he said, his voice deep, carrying easily over the ambient chatter of the range.

Lucas didn't flinch, nor did he back away. His breathing remained slow and measured, a habit he had practiced for months in the quiet corners of his rented room. He kept his gaze locked on the center of Marcus’s sunglasses, refusing to let intimidation win. Behind Marcus, a second man in a grey Leupold shirt and a faded baseball cap watched intently, his arms also crossed, though his expression carried a flicker of curiosity rather than outright dismissal. Lucas knew he didn't belong here among the men with their expensive bolt-action rifles, high-end spotting scopes, and branded gear. But he also knew he had nowhere else to go. The wind shifted again, carrying the sharp, metallic tang of burnt gunpowder and hot brass, a scent that felt more like home to him than the damp walls of the apartment he shared with his mother. He adjusted his grip on the canvas bag, feeling the familiar weight within it.

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